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Why you want to do voluntarylunpaid work at the musium descrirbe the skill and qualities you have that would be useful give the details of when you would be available for work

Why you want to do voluntarylunpaid work at the musium descrirbe the skill and qualities you have that would be useful give the details of when you would be available for work 7xrk
Dear Sir or Madam, This is Kan who is interested in doing voluntalyunpaid work at the musium. I saw the job posting in your website and I applied to this application because I am interested in the history of Japan which you expose in the museum and I study about it at my university so I have confidence to explain well to the audience of your museum. Besides I want audience to know how Japanese history is attractive and unique if compared to other countries. Well, as I said above, I study Japanese history at my university and I would use of this knowledge for this job while I have experiences that I woked at some restaurants and cafes so my own skills of customer service and hospitality mind that I got through experience contribute to your museum to make audiences be satisfied with us. I would like to discuss how I could cooperate with you so it would be glad if I got some dates for appointment to interview. I look forward to getting a positive feedback from you. Best regards. Kan
Dear Sir or Madam,

This is Kan who
is interested
in doing
voluntalyunpaid
work at the
musium
. I
saw
the job posting in your website and I applied to this application
because
I
am interested
in the history of Japan which you expose in the museum and I study about it at my university
so
I have confidence to
explain
well to the audience of your museum.
Besides
I want audience to know how Japanese history is attractive and unique if compared to other countries.

Well, as I said above, I study Japanese history at my university and I would
use
of this knowledge for this job while I have experiences that I
woked
at
some
restaurants and
cafes
so
my
own
skills
of customer service and hospitality mind that I
got
through experience contribute to your museum to
make
audiences
be satisfied
with us.

I would like to discuss how I could cooperate with you
so
it would be glad if I
got
some
dates for appointment to interview.

I look forward to getting a
positive
feedback from you.

Best regards.

Kan
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IELTS letter Why you want to do voluntarylunpaid work at the musium descrirbe the skill and qualities you have that would be useful give the details of when you would be available for work

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
182 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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