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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.

You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. JpqB
Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing this letter to Inform you that I will not be part of the IELTS teaching course from tomorrow onwards. I have described my situation on why I cannot continue the classes. As you already knew, I am working as Software Engineer which is my full-time profession. My aspiration was to write IELTS exam and go on to do my Masters degree in Canada. But now, It looks like, The Project which I am working right now is in a very good space. They have already given me Lead position and looks like I might fly to Australia in the near future as well. I could also learn and get hands-on experience on latest technologies in the Industry as well. I feel, This will help me to stay relevant in the field for a longer period. I chose to do Masters in Canada just because I would get High paying Jobs and eventually get to work on advanced technologies to stay ahead of other people. I consider myself fortunate that I got a similar kind of career even without doing Masters since my new project respects my talent and gives me good recognition. So, I decided not to proceed my Masters which in turn makes IELTS coaching unnecessary. I will definitely come back later if I had a change of heart. A big thanks to you for providing exceptional coaching. It is unfortunate that I could not continue further since, I felt it was a right decision keeping my career in mind. Thank you Yours sincerely, Anderson
Dear Mr. Smith,

I am writing this letter to Inform you that I will not be part of the IELTS teaching course from tomorrow onwards. I have
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described
my situation on why I cannot continue the classes.

As you already knew, I am working as Software Engineer which is my full-time profession. My aspiration was to write IELTS exam and go on to do my
For an academic degree, use "Master’s".
Masters
degree in Canada.
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But
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now
, It looks like, The Project which I am working right
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now
is in a
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very
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good
space. They have already
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given
me Lead position and looks like I might
fly
to Australia in the near future
as well
. I could
also
learn and
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get
hands-on experience on latest technologies in the Industry
as well
. I feel, This will
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help
me to stay relevant in the field for a longer period.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
chose to do
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Masters
in Canada
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just
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because
I would
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get
High paying Jobs and
eventually
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get
to work on advanced technologies to stay ahead of other
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people
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
consider myself fortunate that I
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got
a similar kind of career even without doing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Masters
since my new project respects my talent and gives me
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
recognition.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, I decided not to proceed my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Masters
which in turn
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
IELTS coaching unnecessary.

I will definitely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
back later if I had a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
of heart. A
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big
thanks to you for providing exceptional coaching. It is unfortunate that I could not continue
further
since, I felt it was a right decision keeping my career in mind.

Thank you

Yours
sincerely
,

Anderson
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IELTS letter You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
261 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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