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You recently went on a trip with a friend and you both took some photographs. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter  Ask your friend to send you one of the photographs  Explain why you need that particular photograph  And tell your friend what happened to your copy of it

You recently went on a trip with a friend and you both took some photographs. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter  Ask your friend to send you one of the photographs  Explain why you need that particular photograph  And tell your friend what happened to your copy of it QrlP
Dear Ann, How are you? Hope you are doing great and you recovered from the trip. I'm writing this to ask you to sent a picture of yours which you took during our recent trip. I have lost most of the photographs which we have taken. However I could recollect a few of them. In that, your photos are missing especially the particular picture which you are standing in front of the Burj-Khaifa. It was a gorgeous click. That particular photo shows some reality because it looks like you are touching at the top of the tower. Even though I tried to take similar picture but my tries became futile. Anyway I appreciate your photographer's skill. I think he has extreme pragmatic experience. I'm so sad about the loss of those pictures however i restored some of them. The virus affected to the hardware of my laptop is the main reason of losing my files. It had been there for 1 year when i formatted the system finally. Most of my important files are corrupted due to this. Although the anti-virus is expensive, I bought it and updated. While formatting i got most of my pics and documents back but still missing a few. Hope you'll send it to me soon! Can't wait to see. With Love, (Name)(Signature)
Dear Ann, How are you? Hope you are doing great and you recovered from the trip. I'm writing this to ask you to
sent
a
picture
of yours which you took during our recent trip.

I have lost most of the photographs which we have taken.
However
I could recollect a few of them. In that, your photos are missing
especially
the particular
picture
which you are standing in front of the
Burj-Khaifa
. It was a gorgeous click.

That particular photo
shows
some
reality
because
it looks like you are touching at the top of the tower.
Even though
I tried to take similar
picture
but
my tries became futile. Anyway I appreciate your photographer's
skill
. I
think
he has extreme pragmatic experience.

I'm
so
sad about the loss of those
pictures
however
i
restored
some
of them. The virus
affected
to the hardware of my laptop is the main reason of losing my files. It had been there for 1 year when
i
formatted the system
finally
. Most of my
important
files
are corrupted
due to this. Although the anti-virus is expensive, I
bought
it and updated. While formatting
i
got
most of my pics and documents back
but
still
missing a few.

Hope you'll
send
it to me
soon
! Can't wait to
see
. With
Love
, (Name)(Signature)
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IELTS letter You recently went on a trip with a friend and you both took some photographs. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter  Ask your friend to send you one of the photographs  Explain why you need that particular photograph  And tell your friend what happened to your copy of it

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  American English
5 paragraphs
217 words
6.0
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