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Write letter on complaining to moving company for damage of furniture.

Write letter on complaining to moving company for damage of furniture. 28gA
Dear Mr. Brown, I am writing this letter to complaining about my damaged furniture by your moving service. I found that few of my furniture got damaged badly that I can not repair again and it is now useless. Two chairs are broken completely with that dinning table also having big scraches on surface, in addition to that my bookshelf damaged badly it was so precious for me as it gifted by my late grandfather, moreover corners of hydraulic beds are seems to be damaged. Your company provided me in written assurance for no any harm during work but as it not possible so that I claim full cost of my damged furnitures as earliest as possible. I am looking forward for your immediate positive response on this matter! Your sincerely, Anushree
Dear Mr. Brown,

I am writing this letter to complaining about my damaged furniture by your moving service.

I found that few of my furniture
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got
damaged
badly
that I can not repair again and it is
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now
useless. Two chairs
are broken
completely with that dinning table
also
having
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big
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scraches
on surface,
in addition
to that my bookshelf damaged
badly
it was
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so
precious for me as it gifted by my late grandfather,
moreover
corners of hydraulic beds are seems to
be damaged
.

Your
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company
provided me in written assurance for
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no
any harm during work
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but
as
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it
not possible
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so
that I claim full cost of my
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damged
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furnitures
as
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earliest
as possible.

I am looking forward for your immediate
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positive
response on this matter!

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Your
sincerely
,

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Anushree

IELTS letter Write letter on complaining to moving company for damage of furniture.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
131 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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