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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last 10 years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Dear Sir, I am writing to you this letter regarding the improvement of our reception area, which I think is very essential for our general developement of our company environment. I have been receiving many complaints lately from our customers, on our last meeting our most important costumer came from China and they was very lost, they could not find the way to the main entrance, after entering, they found some chairs in a very bad state and they were not comfortable for sitting, also the fan was not functioning and the weather was very hot. I would like to emphasize that this the meeting room is very crucial for us, since we usually meet our customers there to discuss many aspects, this area should be in a good state, we have to make some developement because it reflects our company, if we can not provide for ourselves a proper meeting room this will probably affects our customer’s trust. Please let met suggest some ideas that i have been thinking lately. I would like us to install a fan, and encounter the area with sofa and a table in the middle where we can discuss contracts, and a datashow for presentation, also if possible we can buy a coffe machine to offer to our clients. Thanks for considering my suggestions. Yours faithfully.

Dear Sir,

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 our customer’s trust.

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 machine to offer to our clients.

Thanks for considering my suggestions.

Yours faithfully
. 