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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter • describe the situation • explain why you cannot continue at this time • say what action you would like to take

You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter • describe the situation • explain why you cannot continue at this time • say what action you would like to take DpYj
Dear Sir, I am writing to inform you that I am withdrawing from the ‘Statistics Fundamentals’ course. I am currently registered for the evening session as part of the Fall 2020 part-time cohort. My student ID is 123456. I am going through ultra-challenging times in my life as I am newly married and have a paucity of time to focus on both my course and full-time job along with family responsibilities. Being inexperienced in a coupled-life I find it hard to keep a balance between work and home. I feel that my focus on the studies is not up to the mark also reflected in the midterm exams, meanwhile, my wife is expecting a baby next month which will certainly double the responsibilities, in such a case I found myself a passenger of two boats. Therefore, I decided to discontinue my part-time studies to avoid any unexpected situation. I would like to thank you for investing the time and resources to make the course useful for working professionals. With my best regards, Ikram Hussain
Dear Sir,

I am writing to inform you that I am withdrawing from the ‘Statistics Fundamentals’ course. I am
currently
registered for the evening session as part of the Fall 2020 part-time cohort. My student ID is 123456.

I am going through ultra-challenging times in my life as I am
newly
married and have a paucity of time to focus on both my course and full-time job along with family responsibilities.
Being inexperienced
in a coupled-life I find it
hard
to
keep
a balance between work and home. I feel that my focus on the studies is not up to the mark
also
reflected in the midterm exams, meanwhile, my wife is expecting a baby
next
month which will
certainly
double the responsibilities, in such a case I found myself a passenger of two boats.
Therefore
, I decided to discontinue my part-time studies to avoid any unexpected situation.

I would like to thank you for investing the time and resources to
make
the course useful for working professionals.

With my best regards,

Ikram
Hussain
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IELTS letter You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter • describe the situation • explain why you cannot continue at this time • say what action you would like to take

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6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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