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Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: • Explain when and how long you will be in town. • Ask whether you can stay at their home. • Offer to pay for yourself.

Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: • Explain when and how long you will be in town. • Ask whether you can stay at their home. • Offer to pay for yourself. NblW
Dear Dr. Smith, I am writing to inform you about my three-month training program, offered by my company, in Lahore, Pakistan. I want to move there on 15th September 2021, a week earlier than the starting date of training, and I will there for three months at most. As you know, it is my first time to leave home and go out of town, and I feel nostalgic, albeit two days away from home. Also, I have never been to Lahore, and do not know much about the city, especially accommodation and travel. Therefore, I want to ask if it is possible to stay in the small guest room in your home? Mom told me that you have an extra room for guests. Furthermore, I am happy to say that my training is well-paid, so I have no financial issue and will pay you three months in advance. Also, I am neat and clean, and I will take great care of your home. I will be happy to hear back from you at your earliest convenience. Your Nephew, Jay
Dear Dr. Smith,

I am writing to inform you about my three-month training program, offered by my
company
, in Lahore, Pakistan. I want to
move
there on 15th September 2021, a week earlier than the starting date of training, and I will there for three months at most.

As you know, it is my
first
time to
leave
home and go out of town, and I feel nostalgic, albeit two days away from home.
Also
, I have never been to Lahore, and do not know much about the city,
especially
accommodation and travel.
Therefore
, I want to ask if it is possible to stay in the
small
guest room in your home? Mom
told
me that you have an extra room for guests.

Furthermore
, I am happy to say that my training is well-paid,
so
I have no financial issue and will pay you three months in advance.
Also
, I am neat and clean, and I will take great care of your home.

I will be happy to hear back from you at your earliest convenience.

Your Nephew,

Jay
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: • Explain when and how long you will be in town. • Ask whether you can stay at their home. • Offer to pay for yourself.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
178 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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