Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course RGRG
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is John Smith and I am writing to enquire about your college's IT456 course. I have always been fascinated by computers since I was young. Despite my interest, I have not taken any formal course for computing. While browsing on the internet, I found your college's IT456 course. The course's focus on programming using Phyton is really appealing and I wanted to enrol immediately. However, I found that the course requires a pre-requisite unit called IT123, which is the basic programming course. Is there a way for me to apply for IT456 without completing IT123? Normally, I would be happy to enrol in a pre-requisite course, but this class's schedule clashes with my work schedule, whereas the IT456 course does not. I am willing to work out a special schedule where I can do both courses at the same time. Thank you and I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, John Smith (Mr. )
Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is John
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
Smith and
I am writing to
Possible spelling mistake. 'enquire' is British English.
enquire
about your college's IT456 course.

I have always
been fascinated
by computers since I was young. Despite my interest, I have not taken any formal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
for computing.

While browsing on the internet, I found your college's IT456
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
. The course's focus on programming using
Possible spelling mistake found.
Phyton
is
really
appealing and I wanted to enrol immediately.
However
, I found that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
requires a
Possible spelling mistake found.
pre-requisite
unit called IT123, which is the basic programming course.

Is there a way for me to apply for IT456 without completing IT123?
Normally
, I would be happy to enrol in a
Possible spelling mistake found.
pre-requisite
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
's schedule clashes with my work schedule, whereas the IT456
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
does not. I am willing to work out a special schedule where I can do both
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
courses
at the same time.

Thank you and I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

John Smith (Mr.
Don't put a space before the closing parenthesis
)

IELTS letter Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
161 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course