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A sports club in your area is about to be closed and you oppose to that . Write a letter to the manager amd make suggestion why it is important that the club stays open .

A sports club in your area is about to be closed and you oppose to that. Write a letter to the manager amd make suggestion why it is important that the club stays open. 1OAW

Dear sir, My name is john and i live in model town, chandigarh. I am writing this letter to express my suggestion about your sports club. I came to know that you are going to shut down the sports club. To begin with, i would like to share something to you as, it is all about your club. Your club is very vital for our society members due to, it is the only place here to play. Since you know that in our society there is no public park for children and other individuals. The service you are providing it is very convenient and affordable for everyone. Furthermore, children after the tuition they prefer to come there and they enjoy alot with there friends and elder ones. Additionally, not only male comes there, female also come after finish their house work. The reason is, there are too much facilities such as, vedio games, snooker, carom board, table tennis, chess, ludo and much more. Infact, such type of games we played there which we cannot afford it however, we have played there because of you. I suggest you that donot close this club it very important for our people. In case you have any issue you can contact to the society's secretary. We will definetely find a solution. I hope you will discuss your concern with us and give us a positive response. Your sincerelyJohn

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positive
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