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write a letter to a friend for spending summer holidays. Suggest advantages and disadvantages and show your availability

write a letter to a friend for spending summer holidays. Suggest advantages and disadvantages and show your availability 8OdV

Dear Ali, I hope you are in the best of health and in high spirits. I'm glad to know that you are thinking of going on a camping holiday this summer and I'm happy to share my views. On the one hand, I'm sure you will enjoy this summer camping because I know you spent previous summers studying courses and doing internships. As Canada is a cold place and lacks social and outdoor activities except for summers, it's the best time to go out and enjoy the mesmerizing greenery and scenery. On the other hand, I would like to mention few possible disadvantages. Because this is a hot season for Canadians and everyone considers going out and escape the workloads, keep in mind the cost of places where you are planning to visit and make necessary preparations in advance, such as taking Halal food with yourself. Finally, I'm sad to say that I won’t be able to catch up with you because of my plan to visit Pakistan as you know it’s been a while I came to Canada and I've missed my family. I wish you all the best for your trip and wish you luck. Your friend, Jay

Dear Ali,

I hope you are in the best of health and in high spirits. I'm glad to know that you are thinking of going on a camping holiday this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvacationsummertime
summer
 and I'm happy to share my views.

On the one hand, I'm sure you will enjoy this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvacationsummertime
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because
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summers
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cold
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summers
, it's the best time to go out and enjoy the mesmerizing greenery and scenery.

On the other hand
, I would like to mention few possible disadvantages. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
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keep
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make
 necessary preparations in advance, such as taking Halal food with yourself.

Finally
, I'm sad to say that I won’t be able to catch up with you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of my plan to visit Pakistan as you know it’s been a while I came to Canada and I've missed my family.

I wish you all the best for your trip and wish you luck.

Your friend,

Jay