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Application letter for a position of gardener

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Dear Sir/MadamI am writing to apply for the position of gardener which I saw advertised in local newspaper 'Guardian' yesterday. I am fifty three years old and I have no special diploma as a gardener. I have twenty years experience in gardening and I have excellent knowledge keeping the garden with flowers and exotic trees. Most recently I worked for 'Town is Green' company in Dublin as their lead gardener. While I was here I developing special flower care for roses and orchids. However, I had to leave my job due to a move to your city. Thanks for your consideration. I will follow up next week to see if I can offer any more information about my skills and experience. Your faithfully, Tom Johnson
Dear Sir/
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writing to apply for the position of gardener which I
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saw
advertised in local newspaper 'Guardian' yesterday. I am
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fifty three
years
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and I have no special diploma as a gardener. I have twenty years experience in gardening and I have excellent knowledge keeping the garden with flowers and exotic trees. Most recently I worked for 'Town is Green'
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company
in Dublin as their lead gardener. While I was here
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I developing
special flower care for roses and orchids.
However
, I had to
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leave
my job due to a
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move
to your city. Thanks for your consideration. I will follow up
next
week to
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see
if I can offer any more information about my
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skills
and experience.
Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
faithfully
, Tom
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Johnson
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IELTS letter Application letter for a position of gardener

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
124 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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