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In your letter, you should tell: • how you know about this city/town • what information was incorrect • what the editor should do about this.

In your letter, you should tell: • how you know about this city/town • what information was incorrect • what the editor should do about this. k678M

Dear Mr. Mark, I am writing this letter regarding your recent article which got published in India Times dated 6th June in the section of ‘Facts and Stories’. In this article, I found that one piece of information has lacked evidence by your team as it didn’t exist. First of all, let me clarify why I am certain about the information? I belong to the city of Taj on which you have written your entire blog and as a local person, I explored every corner of the city. In this post, some facts presented that concern degrading marble color of Taj Mahal in Agra, in which you have written the major reason is because of the nearby factories. I wanted to emphasize that these factories have already been closed 15 years before and not operational because of the Taj. This point is not to be considered in the current situation but I liked your other point regarding acid rain and vehicular pollution. Please try to roll out the correct information concerning the date and section of the previous article, so that people can get the true information from your valuable medium. Regards Dheeraj Kumar

Dear Mr. Mark,

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Regards

Dheeraj Kumar