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You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to bring into your account that I can no longer continue with my evening course as I am no longer to able manage my full time job simultaneously. I was able to manage till date as the working hours were fixed and I used to hard-stop at 5 PM and used to attend evening classes by 6 PM, but now as the financial year end is approaching, my boss has asked me to stay back. Post this financial year, in April I can rejoin the course as I am willing to enhance my skills by attending the course so that I can get future promotions and have better career ahead. I am very glad and delighted that I got such a tutor in my life and I will definitely continue my self learning. Yours Thankfully John

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to bring into your account that I can no longer continue with my evening course as I am no longer Did you mean “to be able”?to be able
to able
 manage my full time job simultaneously
. I was able to manage till date as the working hours were Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).fixed, and
fixed and
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
-This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 at 5 PM and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to attend evening classes by 6 PM, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 as the financial year This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 is approaching, my boss has asked me to stay back.

Post this financial year, in April I can rejoin the course as I am willing to enhance my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 by attending the course This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 future promotions and have better career ahead.

I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 glad and delighted that I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 such a tutor in my life and I will definitely continue my self learning.

Yours Thankfully


John