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You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to bring into your account that I can no longer continue with my evening course as I am no longer to able manage my full time job simultaneously. I was able to manage till date as the working hours were fixed and I used to hard-stop at 5 PM and used to attend evening classes by 6 PM, but now as the financial year end is approaching, my boss has asked me to stay back. Post this financial year, in April I can rejoin the course as I am willing to enhance my skills by attending the course so that I can get future promotions and have better career ahead. I am very glad and delighted that I got such a tutor in my life and I will definitely continue my self learning. Yours Thankfully John
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to bring into your account that I can no longer continue with my evening course as I am no longer
Did you mean “to be able”?
to able
manage my full time job
simultaneously
. I was able to manage till date as the working hours were
Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
fixed and
I
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used
to
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hard
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stop
at 5 PM and
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used
to attend evening classes by 6 PM,
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but
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now
as the financial year
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end
is approaching, my boss has asked me to stay back.

Post this financial year, in April I can rejoin the course as I am willing to enhance my
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skills
by attending the course
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so
that I can
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get
future promotions and have better career ahead.

I am
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very
glad and delighted that I
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got
such a tutor in my life and I will definitely continue my self learning.

Yours
Thankfully


John

IELTS letter You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

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