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You have just spent a weekend staying at the Lilo Hotel in Adelaide. When you get home you find that you have left a bag at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: – introduce yourself – describe the bag and its content – describe how you left your bag and what action you would expect from him/her.

Dear Manager, I am writing this letter to inform you that I have lost my bag during my stay at Lilo Hotel and I realised so, when I reached back home. I checked-in on 13th November and checked-out on 15th November. During my 2 days of stay, I stayed in Room No. 405 and the reservation was made against my name, John Smith. The bag is a grey coloured cabin bag with a small crack on the back side. It has my college documents inside which are quite important for my college admission with couple of clothes. Education degrees are quite necessary for me as I have to submit this to get admission for my Post Graduation. I must have left the bag in the waiting lounge, I had couple of heavy bags with me and I must have kept my bag on the sofa. I would like to request if you could send my bag back to me. I am currently residing at Flat 4, Pekinsen Street, Toronto. You can send the postage under freight to pay category. Yours Thanksfuly John Smith

Dear Manager,

I am writing this letter to inform you that I have lost my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
 during my stay at Lilo Hotel and I Possible spelling mistake. ‘realised’ is British English.realized
realised
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
, when I reached back home. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
-in on 13th November and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
-out on 15th November. During my 2 days of stay, I stayed in Room No. 405 and the reservation was made
 against my name, John Smith.

The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
 is a Possible spelling mistake. ‘grey’ is British English.gray
grey
Possible spelling mistake. ‘coloured’ is British English.colored
coloured
 cabin You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
 with a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 crack on the back side. It has my college documents inside which are quite This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 for my college admission with It seems that an article is missing.a couple of
couple of
 clothes. Education degrees are quite necessary for me as I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 submit this to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 admission for my Post Graduation.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
 in the waiting lounge, I had It seems that an article is missing. Did you mean “the couple of” or “a couple of”?the couple ofa couple of
couple of
 heavy You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bags
 with me and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
 on the sofa. I would like to request if you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
 back to me. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.Furthermore, ILikewise, INot only that, but I
I
 am currently
 residing at Flat 4, Possible spelling mistake found.Pekineses
Pekinsen
 Street, Toronto. You can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 the postage under freight to pay category.

Yours Possible spelling mistake found.ThankfulThankfully
Thanksfuly


John Smith