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You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it

Dear Mr George, I am writing to express my interest in working at our company headquarters in the United Kingdom for a few months to further enhance my skills and get exposure to the global market trends of our products so that I can better contribute to my company and carry out my responsibilities more efficiently. As you know, I have been recently promoted to the assistant product manager post and I am working hard to collaborate with my team to enhance the sales and increase our brand reputation. However, I have been feeling the need to meet and work with our global team members and attend some training sessions that our head office in London arranges frequently. I am quite positive that the opportunity to work in our company’s head office for six months will further enhance my knowledge and give me an exposure to the global market trend. I have talked to Julian and he has agreed to take up my responsibilities during my absence. Furthermore, I will check my emails daily, and be available for emergency phone calls. Once I get back to the office, I would endeavour to work extra hours in order to catch up on anything I had missed. Finally, I would need your support to get approval so that I can work in our company’s head office for six months and fulfil the objectives. I look forward to your positive reply. Yours sincerely, Charles Hugo

Dear Mr George,

I am writing to express my interest in working at our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 headquarters in the United Kingdom for a few months to further
 enhance my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 exposure to the global market trends of our products This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that I can better contribute to my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 and carry out my responsibilities more efficiently
.

As you know, I have been recently promoted to the assistant product manager post and I am working This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 to collaborate with my team to enhance the sales and increase our brand reputation. However
, I have been feeling the need to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 with our global team members and attend This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 training sessions that our head You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
 in London arranges frequently
. I am quite This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 that the opportunity to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 in our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company’s
 head You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
 for six months will further
 enhance my knowledge and give me an exposure to the global market trend.

I have talked to Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).Julian, and
Julian and
 he has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesced
agreed
 to take up my responsibilities during my absence. Furthermore
, I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 my emails daily, and be available for emergency phone calls. Once I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 back to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
, I would Possible spelling mistake. ‘endeavour’ is British English.endeavor
endeavour
 to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 extra hours in order to catch up on anything I had missed.

Finally
, I would need your support to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 approval This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that I can You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 in our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company’s
 head You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
 for six months and fulfil the objectives.

I look forward to your This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 reply.

Yours sincerely
,

Charles Hugo