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You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Dear Mr. Smith, I have enrolled in one of your evening classes held in the George office. Unfortunately, I am writing to inform you that I am no longer able to attend the classes. Two days ago I was promoted to a Project Manager role that implies a higher workload. Therefore, I am afraid that at the end of my working day I will have neither time nor strength to perform well at the course. My new schedule requires me to work for three more hours until 7: 00 pm. My course starts at 6: 00 pm, so I will be one hour late. I would really love to complete this course with High Distinction. That is why I would like to ask if it is possible to reschedule me for the morning class held on weekends. If so, would there be any additional fees or not? I am sincerely sorry for any possible inconveniences that this situation may cause. I am looking forward to hearing from you regarding this matter. Sincerely Yours, Ann Maria
Dear Mr. Smith,

I have enrolled in one of your evening classes held in the George office. Unfortunately, I am writing to inform you that I am no longer able to attend the classes. Two days ago I
was promoted
to a Project Manager role that implies a higher workload.
Therefore
, I am afraid that at the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of my working day I will have neither time nor strength to perform well at the course. My new schedule requires me to work for three more hours until 7: 00 pm. My course
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
starts
at 6: 00 pm,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I will be one hour late.

I would
really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to complete this course with High Distinction.
That is
why I would like to ask if it is possible to reschedule me for the morning
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
held on weekends. If
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
, would there be any additional fees or not? I am
sincerely
sorry for any possible inconveniences that this situation may cause. I am looking forward to hearing from you regarding this matter.

Sincerely
Yours,

Ann Maria
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IELTS letter You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

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7.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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