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You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Dear Mr. Smith, I have enrolled in one of your evening classes held in the George office. Unfortunately, I am writing to inform you that I am no longer able to attend the classes. Two days ago I was promoted to a Project Manager role that implies a higher workload. Therefore, I am afraid that at the end of my working day I will have neither time nor strength to perform well at the course. My new schedule requires me to work for three more hours until 7: 00 pm. My course starts at 6: 00 pm, so I will be one hour late. I would really love to complete this course with High Distinction. That is why I would like to ask if it is possible to reschedule me for the morning class held on weekends. If so, would there be any additional fees or not? I am sincerely sorry for any possible inconveniences that this situation may cause. I am looking forward to hearing from you regarding this matter. Sincerely Yours, Ann Maria

Dear Mr. Smith,

I have enrolled in one of your evening classes held in the George office. Unfortunately, I am writing to inform you that I am no longer able to attend the classes. Two days ago I was promoted
 to a Project Manager role that implies a higher workload. Therefore
, I am afraid that at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of my working day I will have neither time nor strength to perform well at the course. My new schedule requires me to work for three more hours until 7: 00 pm. My course This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 at 6: 00 pm, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I will be one hour late.

I would really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to complete this course with High Distinction. That is
 why I would like to ask if it is possible to reschedule me for the morning This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 held on weekends. If This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
, would there be any additional fees or not? I am sincerely
 sorry for any possible inconveniences that this situation may cause. I am looking forward to hearing from you regarding this matter.

Sincerely
 Yours,

Ann Maria

IELTS letter You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Letter

American English

5 paragraphs

174 words

7.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 7.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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