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You have just spent a weekend staying at the Lilo Hotel in Adelaide. When you get home you find that you have left a bag at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: – introduce yourself – describe the bag and its content – describe how you left your bag and what action you would expect from him/her.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am Laura Bicker, originally from Brisbane, is a regular guest at your Lilo Hotel in Adelaide. Whenever I visit Adelaide, I stay at your hotel. I checked out of your hotel last Monday and unfortunately left a bag. I am hoping that you would send it to my home address via the Australia Post. Recently I enjoyed my stay at your hotel from 14th April to 21st April and I was in room 354. I rushed to check out as I was getting late for my flight and thus forgot a bag in the room. It is a coffee colour leather bag, common among frequent travellers, and medium in size. The bag is around 30×40 cm in dimension. This bag contains some important documents, a travel charger, an Amazon Kindle and a few costumes. I must have left it on the table in the room I stayed in. I would like you to mail the bag with its contents to my address, the same address I am sending this letter from, and I would prefer the Australia Post as the courier. I would bear the cost incurred. Thank you for your kind cooperation. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Laura Bicker
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Laura Bicker,
originally
from Brisbane, is a regular guest at your Lilo
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Hotel
in Adelaide. Whenever I visit Adelaide, I stay at your
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hotel
. I
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checked
out of your
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hotel
last Monday and unfortunately
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left
a
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bag
. I am hoping that you would
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send
it to my home address via the Australia Post.

Recently I enjoyed my stay at your
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hotel
from 14th April to 21st
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April and
I was in room 354. I rushed to
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check
out as I was getting late for my flight and
thus
forgot a
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bag
in the room. It is a coffee
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colour
leather
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bag
, common among frequent
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travellers
, and
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medium in size
. The
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bag
is around 30×40 cm in dimension. This
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bag
contains
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some
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important
documents, a travel charger, an Amazon Kindle and a few costumes. I
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must
have
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left
it on the table in the room I stayed in.

I would like you to mail the
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bag
with its contents to my address, the same address I am sending this letter from, and I would prefer the Australia Post as the courier.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would bear the cost incurred.

Thank you for your kind cooperation. I look forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Laura Bicker
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IELTS letter You have just spent a weekend staying at the Lilo Hotel in Adelaide. When you get home you find that you have left a bag at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: – introduce yourself – describe the bag and its content – describe how you left your bag and what action you would expect from him/her.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
209 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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