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You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, - describe the situation - explain why you cannot continue at this time - say what action you would like to take

You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, - describe the situation - explain why you cannot continue at this time - say what action you would like to take OVMNG
Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing to inform you that I can no longer continue our classes. Although I am going to attend last two lessons in this month in order not to break you schedule, I intend to quit since the next month. The issue is that, I am overvelmed at work right now, and it is becoming too burdensome for me to combine our course and my job. I am becoming too tired and cannot focus on both work and education. Moreover, I had to sale my car, so I commute by public transport, wich is very time-consuming. Therefore, I barely have enough time to sleep. As you remember, I payed for the full semester in advance, and, according our agreement, the payment is not refundable. However, I hope that you would enter in my position and return at least part of this money. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Arthur.
Dear Mr. Smith,

I am writing to inform you that I can no longer continue our classes. Although I am going to attend last two lessons in this month in order not to break you schedule, I intend to quit since the
next
month.

The issue is that, I am
overvelmed
at work right
now
, and it is becoming too burdensome for me to combine our course and my job. I am becoming too tired and cannot focus on both work and education.
Moreover
, I had to sale my car,
so
I commute by public transport,
wich
is
very
time-consuming.
Therefore
, I
barely
have
enough
time to sleep.

As you remember, I
payed
for the full semester in advance, and, according our agreement, the payment is not refundable.
However
, I hope that you would enter in my position and return at least part of this money.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours
faithfully
,

Arthur.

IELTS letter You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, - describe the situation - explain why you cannot continue at this time - say what action you would like to take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
154 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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