Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

You borrowed some books from your school or college library. Unfortunately, you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time

You borrowed some books from your school or college library. Unfortunately, you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time pR5km
Dear madam, I am a student of the BBA course in your institution. I borrowed some coursebooks from the college library for the preparation of my mid-test on 12th March 2021. I had to return these books before 25th March 2021. I am writing this letter to inform you about my inability to return the books on the above-mentioned due date. My grandfather has suffered a heart attack two days ago. I have to visit his residence to take care of him. I have to stay with him for early recovery. My grandfather needs my assistance as I am the only grandson of him. I am probably at home by the end of April month. I am requesting you to allow me to return the books after the due date as you can understand my case. I am aware of the fact that I will be charged a fine for the late submission of borrowed books I am ready to pay that. I would be grateful to you if you allow me to return the books by the end of April month. thanking you. yours faithfully, kiran.
Dear madam, I am a student of the BBA course in your institution. I borrowed
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
coursebooks from the college library for the preparation of my mid-
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
test
on 12th March 2021. I had to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
return
these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
25th March 2021.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am writing this letter to inform you about my inability to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
return
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
on the above-mentioned due date. My grandfather has suffered a heart attack two days ago. I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
visit his residence to take care of him. I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
stay with him for early recovery. My grandfather needs my assistance as I am the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
grandson of him. I am
probably
at home by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of April month. I am requesting you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
me to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
return
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
after the due date as you can understand my case.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am aware of the fact that I will
be charged
a fine for the late submission of borrowed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
I am ready to pay that.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would be grateful to you if you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
me to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
return
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of April month.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
thanking
you.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
yours
faithfully
,
Possible spelling mistake found.
kiran
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS letter You borrowed some books from your school or college library. Unfortunately, you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
187 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • You borrowed some books from your school or college library. Unfortunately, you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time