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Write a letter to this friend. In your letter, tell him/her about the gift tell how you want to sent the gift to this friend explain why you chose this gift for your friend Write at least 150 words.

Write a letter to this friend. In your letter, tell him/her about the gift tell how you want to sent the gift to this friend explain why you chose this gift for your friend ljeDK
Dear June, How are you doing? Hope you and your family is doing wonderfull. It felt so good to receive a letter from you last week. we all are doing gret here. The reason I am writing this letter to you is because I wanted to tell you about the gift that I brought for you. I know howmuch you love good music, so I bought a portable JBL blutooth speakers for you which come with 2 year warrenty. They have so many nice features like good quality bass and sound, and they are just 7 inches long, also it is waterproof. I know how sad you were when you lost your bluetooth speakers in the last pool party when it feel into the sweaming pool. So I got you this waterproof speakers so you can have as many as pool party you want. I have currier you this speaker through blue dart currier service, and provided them your phone number so they can contact you. Missing you imencely, and hoping to meet you soon. take care. Warm wisses, your Dave
Dear June,

How are you doing? Hope you and your family is doing
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wonderfull
. It felt
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so
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good
to receive a letter from you last week.
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we
all are doing
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gret
here.

The reason I am writing this letter to you is
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because
I wanted to
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tell
you about the gift that I brought for you. I know
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howmuch
you
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love
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good
music,
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so
I
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bought
a portable JBL
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blutooth
speakers for you which
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come
with 2 year
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warrenty
. They have
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so
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many
nice features like
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good
quality bass and sound, and they are
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just
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7 inches
long,
also
it is waterproof.

I know how sad you were when you lost your
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bluetooth
speakers in the last pool party when it
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feel
into the
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sweaming
pool.
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So
I
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got
you this waterproof speakers
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so
you can have as
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many
as pool party you want. I have
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currier
you this speaker through blue dart
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currier
service, and provided them your phone number
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so
they can contact you.

Missing you
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imencely
, and hoping to
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meet
you
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soon
.
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take
care.

Warm
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wisses
,

your Dave
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IELTS letter Write a letter to this friend. In your letter, tell him/her about the gift tell how you want to sent the gift to this friend explain why you chose this gift for your friend

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  American English
7 paragraphs
180 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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