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Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: • thank them for the photos and for the holiday • explain why you didn’t write earlier • invite them to come and stay with you

Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: • thank them for the photos and for the holiday • explain why you didn’t write earlier • invite them to come and stay with you pR50m
Dear Nikhil, How are you, I hope you are fine and safe. Last month I really had a great time with you all in our holiday trip. I would like to, thankyou for sharing our photos which was taken in Andaman islands. The photos posted on Instagram looks very eye-catching and creative. I am impressed with your professional photography. These photos really remember our trip, when ever I see I start recollecting sweet memories which I spent with you guys. I am extremely sorry, for not writing a letter earlier. Because I was very busy with my office work so, I couldn’t reply you back as soon as reached home. I want to throw a party to our friends so, I am planning to invite all of you to come and stay for 1 week. I hope we will meet together again. Best wishes, santhosh
Dear Nikhil,

How are you, I hope you are fine and safe. Last month I
really
had a great time with you all in our holiday trip.

I would like to,
thankyou
for sharing our photos which
was taken
in Andaman islands. The photos posted on Instagram looks
very
eye-catching and creative. I
am impressed
with your professional photography. These photos
really
remember our trip, when ever I
see
I
start
recollecting sweet memories which I spent with you guys.

I am
extremely
sorry, for not writing a letter earlier.
Because
I was
very
busy with my office work
so
, I couldn’t reply you back as
soon
as reached home.

I want to throw a party to our friends
so
, I am planning to invite all of you to
come
and stay for 1 week. I hope we will
meet
together again.

Best wishes,

santhosh
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IELTS letter Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: • thank them for the photos and for the holiday • explain why you didn’t write earlier • invite them to come and stay with you

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  American English
7 paragraphs
144 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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