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You have a friend who lives in a city abroad. You should like to do a course at colleges in this city. Write a letter to your friend asking some advise and choosing appropriate college

You have a friend who lives in a city abroad. You should like to do a course at colleges in this city. Write a letter to your friend asking some advise and choosing appropriate college XV18w
Dear Jeny, I am writing to ask if you could give me your some advice about choosing the best course at colleges in your city. You are living in this city for several years and I think you know which college is the best one. It should be convenient to me to live and study. In which college can I take good knowledge? I would be happy if the college has a dormitory too. I know you are very busy person but I would approciate it if you spent your precious time for reading my letter. I look forward to recieving your advice. Best wishes Susan.
Dear
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Jeny
,

I am writing to ask if you could give me your
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some
advice about choosing the best course at colleges in your city.

You are living in this city for several years and I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
you know which college is the best one. It should be convenient to me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
and study. In which college can I take
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
knowledge? I would be happy if the college has a dormitory too.

I know you are
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very
busy person
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but
I would
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approciate
it if you spent your precious time for reading my letter.

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I
look forward to
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recieving
your advice.

Best wishes

Susan.
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IELTS letter You have a friend who lives in a city abroad. You should like to do a course at colleges in this city. Write a letter to your friend asking some advise and choosing appropriate college

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
106 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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