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Letter regarding noises to my neighbours

Letter regarding noises to my neighbours Epm8Q
Dear neighbours, I really appreciate you for reaching out to me regarding the noise from my flat. I was experiencing problems with my bathroom, that's why I had to invite workers to fix them. They were too loud and it took too long to finish the work. I sincerely apologize for this situation and for causing you all these troubles. It's not normal to disturb you with such a noise for the whole week. I will never order anything from the company that provided such a noisy and problematic service. I will be happy if you accept my apologies and little gift. I remember your kids like Marvel movies, so I decided to buy tickets to the latest Marvel movie for your whole family. I will give you a notice if anything like this happens again. Also, each worker invited to my flat will be warned regarding unwanted noises. Thank you for your patience! Best regards, Dmitry
Dear
neighbours
,

I
really
appreciate you for reaching out to me regarding the noise from my flat. I was experiencing problems with my bathroom, that's why I had to invite workers to
fix
them. They were too loud and it took too long to finish the work.

I
sincerely
apologize for this situation and for causing you all these troubles. It's not normal to disturb you with such a noise for the whole week.

I will never order anything from the
company
that provided such a noisy and problematic service. I will be happy if you accept my apologies and
little
gift.
I
remember your kids like Marvel movies,
so
I decided to
buy
tickets to the latest Marvel movie for your whole family.

I
will give you a notice if anything like this happens again.
Also
, each worker invited to my flat will
be warned
regarding unwanted noises.

Thank you for your patience!

Best regards,

Dmitry
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IELTS letter Letter regarding noises to my neighbours

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
156 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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