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write a letter to your friend in which you tell the household responsibilities when you are on your on your vaccation who is agreed to take care of your house.

write a letter to your friend in which you tell the household responsibilities when you are on your on your vaccation who is agreed to take care of your house. bEVYg
Dear Ayan, Hope u r in good health and your family as well. I am good too. As per my request you are agreed to take care of my house while i am on my vaccation, so here is my contact details that if there is any emergency you can coordinate to me. my cell number is 333333 and my whats app no is also the same. my another no is666666. As you know that i have a pet cat and her small house is placed in my car porch. so you should come at around 4 pm to my house daily. here is her daily routine as my cat is trained enough for her needs. first you tide her house for reason that my cat is fond of cleanliness. then u take her for a walk to the nearest park. mostly i spend atleast 1 hour in the park. and lastly after returning to home you give her 6 scoops of her meal which will be enough for her dinner and breakfast aswell. after done off my pet responsibilities please watering my plants in the garden, and while you are doing so please have a look on my water tank so that it would not be overflow. I forget that before when you start watering please turn on the machine switch and do check my tank water level so the next day you will not ran out of water. After done all that dont forget to pat my cat with love before leaving my house. i hope you will take good care of my house in my absence. Thank you.
Dear
Ayan
,

Hope u r in
good
health and your family
as well
. I am
good
too. As per my request you are
agreed
to take care of my
house
while
i
am on my
vaccation
,
so
here is my contact
details
that if there is any emergency you can coordinate to me. my cell number is 333333 and my
whats app
no
is
also
the same.
my
another no is666666.

As you know that
i
have a pet cat and her
small
house
is placed
in my car porch.
so
you should
come
at around 4 pm to my
house
daily.
here
is her daily routine as my cat
is trained
enough
for her needs.
first
you tide her
house
for reason that my cat is fond of cleanliness.
then
u take her for a walk to the nearest park.
mostly
i
spend
atleast
1 hour in the park.
and
lastly
after returning to home you give her 6 scoops of her meal which will be
enough
for her dinner and breakfast
aswell
.

after
done off my pet responsibilities
please
watering my plants in the garden, and while you are doing
so
please
have a look on my water tank
so
that it would not be overflow. I forget that
before
when you
start
watering
please
turn on the machine switch and do
check
my tank water level
so
the
next
day you will not
ran
out of water. After done all that
dont
forget to pat my cat with
love
before
leaving my
house
.
i
hope you will take
good
care of my
house
in my absence. Thank you.
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IELTS letter write a letter to your friend in which you tell the household responsibilities when you are on your on your vaccation who is agreed to take care of your house.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
271 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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