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Write a reply giving advice about who failed examination what she should do

Write a reply giving advice about who failed examination what she should do EpmW3

, Dear friend John How are you? How is everyone at home? I am very busy studying for my examination. I am sorry to hear that you are feeling very unhappy. Thanks you for sharing your problems. I think I can offer you some advice My dear, it is not the last examination or opportunity of your life. You have a bright future too. I strongly recommend you don't get depressed about the poor results, but instead concentrate on the mistakes you have made and try to improve yourself. Then you told me you didn't have enough time to study so many tests. For this problem, I think you can talk to your teacher because they understand you very well. They help you. You should timetable to spend your time better. I think it's good for you. Don't worry. So don't give up your studies. You are intelligent and hardworking. I am sure you will be able to qualify in the next exam. I hope this advice is useful. Please write to me again if you need any more help. Your sincerely Muchchi

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My dear, it is not the last examination or opportunity of your life. You have a bright future too. I strongly
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 to spend your time better. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
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 for you. Don't worry.

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So
 don't give up your studies. You are intelligent and hardworking. I am sure you will be able to qualify in the next
 exam.

I hope this advice is useful. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 write to me again if you need any more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
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.

Your sincerely
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