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Write a letter to the principal of a college in which you got accepted and say you cannot start the course.

Write a letter to the principal of a college in which you got accepted and say you cannot start the course. DNRLo

Dear Sir, I, Prashant Singh am a student of the MBA part time evening course. I have completed my first semester with good scores. The course is divided in four semesters of six months each. The next semester is scheduled to begin on first of August 2021. The classes start at 6 pm everyday Monday to Friday. I had taken up this course because I work from 10 am till 5 pm in a factory. This course will be of advantage for me in my workplace once I complete it. Unfortunately, due to unavoidable circumstances I have had a divert my finances elsewhere and as a result I cannot pay the course fee on time for the upcoming semester. I will also have to work over-time and put in extra hours so that I can earn more money to make ends meet. In six months I expect to be in a more comfortable financial position. I request you to kindly give me a break in studies for six months. I shall rejoin the course in March 2021 as a second semester student Thanking you. Yours sincerely, Prashant

Dear Sir,

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part time
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course
. I have completed my first
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good
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course
is divided
 in four semesters of six months each. The next
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begin
 on first
 of August 2021. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
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start
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course
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because
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course
 will be of advantage for me in my workplace once I complete it.

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have to
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so
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make
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meet
. In six months I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 to be in a more comfortable financial position.

I request you to kindly give me a break in studies for six months. I shall rejoin the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
 in March 2021 as a second semester Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphstudent.student!student?student:student,student;
student


Thanking you.

Yours sincerely
,

Prashant