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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have a friend who has always liked the car you currently drive. Now you have decided to sell the car. You think your friend might be interested in buying it. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter, say why you want to sell your car describe the condition of the car invite the friend to come and see the car himself/herself someday Write at least 150 words.

You have a friend who has always liked the car you currently drive. Now you have decided to sell the car. You think your friend might be interested in buying it. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter, say why you want to sell your car describe the condition of the car invite the friend to come and see the car himself/herself someday 68n0
Dear Emily, I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirits. I am writing on regard of selling my current car that you have been looking for a long time. Initially, the reason for the sale is migration. To be more precise, I am getting relocated to Canada for managing the new branch of my company in next month. Therefore, I am selling all my household belongings including my car. Furthermore, the car is in good condition. As you are well aware about my car which is Mahindra Scorpio S3 plus 2016 model, known for its durability. It is available with manual transmission. Though it's been four years, depending upon the fuel type it has great mileage. Infact, it's engine is still very smooth, while it's air conditioner system is also intact. Hence, the maintenance cost of this car is affordable. Finally, you can come in next week at my home to get a closer look at my car. You can test drive the car and examine it by yourself. So, it will allow you to make favourable decision. Looking forward to seeing you soon. Best regards, Devi
Dear Emily, I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirits. I am writing on regard of selling my
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current
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car
that you have been looking for a long time.

Initially
, the reason for the sale is migration. To be more precise, I am getting relocated to Canada for managing the new branch of my
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company
in
next
month.
Therefore
, I am selling all my household belongings including my car.

Furthermore
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
is in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
condition. As you are well aware about my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
which is Mahindra Scorpio S3 plus 2016 model, known for its durability. It is available with manual transmission. Though it's been four years, depending upon the fuel type it has great mileage.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Infact
, it's engine is
still
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very
smooth, while it's air conditioner system is
also
intact.
Hence
, the maintenance cost of this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
is affordable.

Finally
, you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
in
next
week at my home to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a closer look at my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
. You can
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test
drive the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
and examine it by yourself.
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So
, it will
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allow
you to
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make
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favourable
decision.

Looking forward to seeing you
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soon
.

Best regards, Devi
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IELTS letter You have a friend who has always liked the car you currently drive. Now you have decided to sell the car. You think your friend might be interested in buying it. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter, say why you want to sell your car describe the condition of the car invite the friend to come and see the car himself/herself someday

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
191 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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