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You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you

You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you Ye95

Dear Paul, I am writing this letter to give you the insights about the latest story which is quite prevailing right now in every form of the media and I can feel your curiosity towards it. Let me explain the situation in more detail. Recently, the State Bank of the nation has declared its bankruptcy and it was so shocking to hear that it simply broke the trust of all the genuine customers they had with them. Owing to the fact that it is a public institution, people invested heavily in terms of fixed deposits, savings. and whatnot. Like the American Bank declared itself bankrupt last year, this year it was our very own prestigious bank's number. Who'd have thought that? As it is such an unbelievable incident, I also had to face the heat. As per the current scenario, I am on the verge of losing half a million dollars as they have agreed to pay first to their investors and then to the general public. I shall update you as soon as I know more about it. Your friend, ABC

Dear Paul,

I am writing this letter to give you the insights about the latest story which is quite prevailing right This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 in every form of the media and I can feel your curiosity towards it.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 the situation in more detail. Recently, the State Bank of the nation has declared its bankruptcy and it was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 shocking to hear that it simply
 broke the trust of all the genuine customers they had with them. Owing to the fact that it is a public institution, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 invested heavily
 in terms of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectified
fixed
 deposits, savings. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAnd
and
 whatnot. Like the American Bank declared itself bankrupt last year, this year it was our This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 prestigious bank's number. Who'd have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 that?

As it is such an unbelievable incident, I also
 had to face the heat. As per the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 scenario, I am on the verge of losing half a million dollars as they have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesced
agreed
 to pay first
 to their investors and then to the Consider using "public".public
general public
.

I shall update you as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as I know more about it.

Your friend,

ABC