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You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter • describe a news story in your country • explain why people are interested in it • say how the story personally relates to you

You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter • describe a news story in your country • explain why people are interested in it • say how the story personally relates to you D9gE
Dear Sangita, I happy to see your message after so long time. Thanks to technology and social media we are connected after ages. As you mailed me that you are eager to know about latest announcement of online course on the subject of covid safety precautions I am happy to share the details. Nowadays, whole world is suffering from covid infection. This infection is spreading promptly due to which, Government of Gujarat launch the course to spread the awareness among public. Everyone can apply for this course regardless nationality. Basically, this course is in a layman language so, without having much knowledge of medical, a person can learn. Many people like to attend this because it is free of cost. Recently, my father is infected by covid. At that time, we do not have basic knowledge of how to treat a covid infected person. After attending this now, I have so much information. As per my opinion, every person should attend this course and it’s a great initiative by authority. Hope to see you soon. Be in touch. Yours Faithfully, Matangi Dave
Dear
Sangita
,

I
happy to
see
your message after
so
long time. Thanks to technology and social media we
are connected
after ages.
As
you mailed me that you are eager to know about
latest
announcement of online
course
on the subject of
covid
safety precautions I am happy to share the
details
.

Nowadays, whole world is suffering from
covid
infection. This infection is spreading
promptly
due to which,
Government
of Gujarat launch the
course
to spread the awareness among public. Everyone can apply for this
course
regardless nationality.

Basically
, this
course
is in a layman language
so
, without having much knowledge of medical, a person can learn.
Many
people
like to attend this
because
it is free of cost.

Recently, my father
is infected
by
covid
. At that time, we do not have basic knowledge of how to treat a
covid
infected person. After attending this
now
, I have
so
much information. As per my opinion, every person should attend this
course
and it’s a great initiative by authority.

Hope to
see
you
soon
. Be in touch.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Matangi
Dave
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IELTS letter You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter • describe a news story in your country • explain why people are interested in it • say how the story personally relates to you

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
181 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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