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You applied to a job, were offered the position, but have decided not to accept the offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor with whom you interviewed. In your letter: Explain the reason why you are declining the offer Describe your reasons for staying with your current position Express your gratitude.

You applied to a job, were offered the position, but have decided not to accept the offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor with whom you interviewed. In your letter: Explain the reason why you are declining the offer Describe your reasons for staying with your current position Express your gratitude. wrBe

Dear ms. Barry, I am writing this letter with regards to my interview last week. Unfortunately i like to inform you that I won’t be able to accept the position offered to me at your company. Let me explain you my situation, Your organization is one of the pioneers in semiconductor. It required a lot of dedication and time to be justifiable employee to the company. right now I am inclined more towards work and family balance as a new member will be an addition to the family. Moreover I am happy with my income and benefits at my current job. I am comfortable in the working environment presently. I can have a flexible work schedule as per my need. All these reasons make me pass with the job offered your office. I would like to thank you for offering me such a essential rank at your organization. In the near future we might can work on something when I can dedicate myself totally to the vision of your company. In future if any vacancy develop please let me know. I look forward to hearing from you. Thanking you for your consideration. Yours faithfully

Dear ms. Barry, I am writing this letter Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".in regard towith regard toregarding
with regards to
 my interview ‘last week’ indicates a finished event of the past. Please check the predicate's tense.
last week
. Unfortunately Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 like to inform you that I won’t be able to accept the position offered to me at your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 you my situation, Your organization is one of the pioneers in semiconductor. It required This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 dedication and time to be justifiable employee to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterRight
right
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 I am inclined
 more towards work and family balance as a new member will be an addition to the family.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Moreover,
Moreover
 I am happy with my income and benefits at my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 job. I am comfortable in the working environment presently
. I can have a flexible work schedule as per my need. All these reasons This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 me pass with the job offered your office.

I would like to thank you for offering me such Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 essential rank at your organization. In the near future we Two modal verbs connected. Did you mean: "might, can", "might" or "can"?might, canmightcan
might can
 work on something when I can dedicate myself totally
 to the vision of your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. In future if any vacancy develop This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know. I look forward to hearing from you. Thanking you for your consideration.

Yours faithfully