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You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you

You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you 0OAB
Dear Matangi, Hope you are fine and your business is going well. I'd like to share with you the mainstream news going on nowadays in India. Actually, there is a huge campaign going on against the government regarding farmer's policy. The farmers from Punjab and Haryana come along for their benefits and urging to the government about the same. I know it seems very filmy but this is truth. In the start, people were not taking it seriously because it looked like a normal relly like others going on nowadays. However, yesterday one of the farmers done a suicide attempt on the border of Delhi and Punjab. I think that might be the reason people start involved in such an unfortunate incident as it is directly connected to the emotions of the people. I didn't want to involve as it looks very dramatic and fake. But when on 26th January people became aggressive and harm our heritage building Red Fort. I can't resist myself without involvement as it really hearts me. I know when you heard about this uncommon event you also feel bad. Hope all these things finish at a positive end. I'll update you further about the latest updates. Lots of love, Kanan
Dear
Matangi
,

Hope you are fine and your business is going well. I'd like to share with you the mainstream news going on nowadays in India.

Actually, there is a huge campaign going on against the
government
regarding farmer's policy. The farmers from Punjab and Haryana
come
along for their benefits and urging to the
government
about the same. I know it seems
very
filmy
but
this is truth.

In the
start
,
people
were not taking it
seriously
because
it looked like a normal
relly
like others going on nowadays.
However
, yesterday one of the farmers done a suicide attempt on the border of Delhi and Punjab. I
think
that might be the reason
people
start
involved in such an unfortunate incident as it is
directly
connected to the emotions of the
people
.

I didn't want to involve as it looks
very
dramatic and fake.
But
when on 26th January
people
became aggressive and harm our heritage building Red Fort. I can't resist myself without involvement as it
really
hearts me. I know when you heard about this uncommon
event
you
also
feel
bad
.

Hope all these things finish at a
positive
end
. I'll update you
further
about the latest updates.

Lots of
love
,

Kanan
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IELTS letter You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you

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  American English
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6.0
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