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Spent a week at friends house and forgot the wallet. thank you friend, explain what you left, Give instruction how to send it back

Spent a week at friends house and forgot the wallet. thank you friend, explain what you left, Give instruction how to send it back kPRW
Dear Mandeep, Hope you and your family are doing well. I could not thank you for the perfect vacation I had last week with you and your family after such a long time. It was an excellent experience to spend some quality time with old time friend like you, and enjoy the life in a lush green valley. After returning from the trip, I started looking at our pictures and found I too had clicked few decent photos in my mobile, but you had most of the memorable moments in you DSLR camera. Let us share that to our freinds group and rejoice the fun moments. I am sure Mary will laugh at our pictures. After returning home, I realized that I don't have my wallet with me, and even checked my luggage bags but could not find it. Then suddendly I remembered that before leaving your house, I kept it on the table in guest room and forget to take it back. The wallet has my driving license, Aadhar Card and few credit cards as well. I may need these ID's since I have a travel coming up next week. Therefore, I request you to send it in most secure and fastest way, and I think Fedex courier would be most suitable for it. Appreciate all your help and see you soon Bubby. Your lovingly, Mike
Dear
Mandeep
,

Hope you and your family are doing well. I could not thank you for the perfect vacation I had last week with you and your family after such a long time. It was an excellent experience to spend
some
quality time with
old
time friend like you, and enjoy the life in a lush green valley.

After returning from the trip, I
started
looking at our pictures and found I too had clicked few decent photos in my mobile,
but
you had most of the memorable moments in you DSLR camera.
Let
us share that to our
freinds
group and rejoice the fun moments. I am sure Mary will laugh at our pictures. After returning home, I realized that I don't have my wallet with me, and even
checked
my luggage bags
but
could not find it. Then
suddendly
I remembered that
before
leaving your
house
, I
kept
it on the table in guest room and forget to take it back.

The wallet has my driving license,
Aadhar
Card and few credit cards
as well
. I may need
these ID
's since I have a travel coming up
next
week.
Therefore
, I request you to
send
it in most secure and fastest way, and I
think
Fedex
courier would be most suitable for it. Appreciate all your
help
and
see
you
soon
Bubby
.

Your
lovingly
,

Mike
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IELTS letter Spent a week at friends house and forgot the wallet. thank you friend, explain what you left, Give instruction how to send it back

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