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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take yVXJ
Dear Ms. Reena I am writing this letter regarding the complain you did about the disturbance caused due to the noise in my flat. The reason behind the unwanted noise is that my cousin's children have visited my home in their vacation. I am terribly sorry for the problem you had to face because of my loved ones. i am feeling guilty for this act. Moreover, I assure you that in future there will be no such chaos which would trouble you. In addition, i had enrolled them in an activity because of which they will be busy for approximately 3 - 4 hours and you can prepare for your exams. i wish you good luck for your exams. I aplogise again for this behaviour. Hope you would understand as they are kids and moreover, holidays make the children over - excited. Kindly accept my apologies. Yours Sincerely, Harpreet Kaur
Dear Ms.
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Reena


I am writing this letter regarding the
The word 'complain' is a verb. Did you mean the noun "complaint"?
complain
you did about the disturbance caused due to the noise in my flat. The reason behind the unwanted noise is that my cousin's children have visited my home in their vacation.

I am
terribly
sorry for the problem you had to face
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
loved
ones.
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am feeling
The usual collocation for "guilty" is "of" not "for". Did you mean "guilty of"?
guilty for
this act.
Moreover
, I assure you that in future there will be no such chaos which would trouble you.
In addition
,
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
had enrolled them in an activity
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of which they will be busy for approximately
Consider using an n-dash (half dash), if you want to indicate numerical ranges or time ranges.
3 - 4
hours and you can prepare for your exams.
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
wish you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
luck for your exams.

I
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aplogise
again for this
Possible spelling mistake. 'behaviour' is British English.
behaviour
. Hope you would understand as they are kids and
moreover
, holidays
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
the children over
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
-
excited.

Kindly accept my apologies.

Yours
Sincerely
,

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Harpreet
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Kaur

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

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  American English
7 paragraphs
149 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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