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You had ordered to purchase an item online but you have received no item what you ordered. Write a letter to company manager.

You had ordered to purchase an item online but you have received no item what you ordered. Write a letter to company manager. 7JxK3
I, am writing this letter to Express my disappointment on item you sent me instead of what I have ordered. I have decided to purchase a pair of rings online from your company but your company sent me a pair of handbags which I have received today which is not useful for me. Now I have returned the things to your supplier and requests you to send me a pair of rings which I have ordered. Hope looking forward to receiving my order. Your faithful, Ranjit.
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writing this letter to Express my disappointment on item you
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sent
me
instead
of what I have ordered. I have decided to
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purchase
a pair of rings online from your
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company
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but
your
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company
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sent
me a pair of handbags which I have received
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today
which is not useful for me.
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Now
I have returned the things to your supplier and requests you to
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send
me a pair of rings which I have ordered. Hope looking forward to receiving my order. Your faithful,
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Ranjit
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IELTS letter You had ordered to purchase an item online but you have received no item what you ordered. Write a letter to company manager.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
86 words
This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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