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You had ordered to purchase an item online but you have received no item what you ordered. Write a letter to company manager.

You had ordered to purchase an item online but you have received no item what you ordered. Write a letter to company manager. 7JxK3

I, am writing this letter to Express my disappointment on item you sent me instead of what I have ordered. I have decided to purchase a pair of rings online from your company but your company sent me a pair of handbags which I have received today which is not useful for me. Now I have returned the things to your supplier and requests you to send me a pair of rings which I have ordered. Hope looking forward to receiving my order. Your faithful, Ranjit.

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 me a pair of rings which I have ordered. Hope looking forward to receiving my order. Your faithful, Possible spelling mistake found.TransitRabbitBanditKanjiRankinRandi
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IELTS letter You had ordered to purchase an item online but you have received no item what you ordered. Write a letter to company manager.

Letter

American English

1 paragraphs

86 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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