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Hi everyone, I hope everybody is doing great and healthy as well and I’m fine too. As we all know, it’s been 6 months since the pandemic began, and we haven’t met since then. Now I’m looking for a way so that we all can have some fun before we leave the college. I’m pretty sure that you guys are also wanted to meet each other. So what about a movie night followed by many fun activities? I’m planning to take you guys for a new movie that has been released recently, and critics are appreciating this movie. I think we should definitely go to watch this movie called “American Made". It features the world famous Tom Cruise as Barry Seal, and he is accompanied by Sarah Wright as Lucky Seal and directed by Doug Liman. The genre of this film is crime thriller in which protagonist Barry Seal is a commercial pilot and how he gets involved in drugs and arms smuggling while working for the CIA, just watched the trailer and you’ll get a fair idea how good this movie is and to be honest with you guys, score of this film is not that great but none of us are into the music so we can definitely ignore this aspect. It might be a good idea if we go for dinner at the famous “The Nazeers” after the movie followed a long drive, and I think the best way to end this memorable night by having tea at our college spot. Being a host, it’s my duty to drop you all at your respective addresses safely. It’s going to be a night to cherish for life and a perfect farewell to our college life. I’m waiting for your green signal so that I can make arrangements. Write to me ASAP about the decision. I’m really looking forward to it. Take care All the best, Pankaj.
Hi everyone, I hope everybody is doing great and healthy
as well
and I’m fine too.

As we all know, it’s been 6 months since the pandemic began, and we haven’t met since then.
Now
I’m looking for a way
so
that we all can have
some
fun
before
we
leave
the college. I’m pretty sure that you guys are
also
wanted to
meet
each other.
So
what about a
movie
night followed by
many
fun activities?

I’m planning to take you guys for a new
movie
that has
been released
recently, and critics are appreciating this
movie
. I
think
we should definitely go to
watch
this
movie
called “American Made
"
. It features the world
famous
Tom Cruise as Barry Seal, and he
is accompanied
by Sarah Wright as Lucky Seal and directed by Doug
Liman
. The genre of this film is crime thriller in which protagonist Barry Seal is a commercial pilot and how he
gets
involved in drugs and arms smuggling while working for the CIA,
just
watched
the trailer and you’ll
get
a
fair
idea
how
good
this
movie
is and to be honest with you guys, score of this film is not that great
but
none of us are into the music
so
we can definitely
ignore
this aspect.

It might be a
good
idea
if we go for dinner at the
famous
“The
Nazeers
” after the
movie
followed a long drive, and I
think
the best way to
end
this memorable night by having tea at our college spot. Being a host, it’s my duty to drop you all at your respective addresses
safely
.

It’s going to be a night to cherish for life and a perfect farewell to our college life. I’m waiting for your green signal
so
that I can
make
arrangements.

Write to me ASAP about the decision. I’m
really
looking forward to it.

Take care

All the best,

Pankaj.
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