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Letter to accommodation officer at the college and ask for a new room next term.

Letter to accommodation officer at the college and ask for a new room next term. NmNnW
Dear sir, I am second year student of b. pharm. currently I accomodate in a room provided by college. I am writing this letter to inform you about annoying of my room mate Now I would like directly talk about problems created by him. Firstly, while I am trying to focus on study he started the songs on big loud speaker. Due to this I can not able to focus. Secondly, he goes to bed on very late night so he disturbs me from good sleep which human indeed.
Dear sir, I am second year student of b.
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pharm
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currently
I
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accomodate
in a room provided by college. I am writing this letter to inform you about annoying of my
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room mate


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Now
I would like
directly
talk about problems created by him.
Firstly
, while I am trying to focus on study he
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
the songs on
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big
loud speaker. Due to this I can not able to focus.
Secondly
, he goes to bed on
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very
late night
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so
he disturbs me from
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good
sleep which human
indeed
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IELTS letter Letter to accommodation officer at the college and ask for a new room next term.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
89 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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