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Write a reply to your friend. In your letter. • Give details of what you know about his company. • Explain your current situation. • Give your answer to the offer and explain why.

Write a reply to your friend. In your letter. • Give details of what you know about his company. • Explain your current situation. • Give your answer to the offer and explain why. VlMbO
Dear Bob, I hope doing you’re doing well. I recently received your letter. You are offering for me in your company is IT Info tech. Your company has grown leaps it could not seem policy and agreement. However, I regret to inform that I am currently working InfoTech Company and it seems good salary package. I can’t able to work in your company IT Info Tech because My Company is undertaking large three month project. I was organizing this project any other team I can’t deviated. I was involving top to bottom of the project; it is beginning level. If there no urgency to fill the post, then I considered my applications that after three month. I hope to understand my situation. I look forward to hearing you. Yours buddy, Ram.
Dear Bob,

I hope doing you’re doing well. I recently received your letter. You are offering for me in your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
is IT Info tech. Your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
has grown leaps it could not seem policy and agreement.

However
, I regret to inform that I am
currently
working
Possible spelling mistake found.
InfoTech
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Company
and it seems
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
salary package. I can’t able to work in your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
IT Info Tech
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
My
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Company
is undertaking large
It seems that a hyphen is missing.
three month
project. I was organizing this project any other team I can’t
The verb 'can't' requires base form of this verb: "deviate"
deviated
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
The verb 'involving' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
was involving
top to bottom of the project; it is beginning level.

If
Please check whether a verb is missing here or whether 'there' should be 'their'.
there no
urgency to fill the post, then I considered my applications that after three
Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: "months".
month
. I hope to understand my situation.

I look forward to hearing you.

Yours buddy,

Ram.

IELTS letter Write a reply to your friend. In your letter. • Give details of what you know about his company. • Explain your current situation. • Give your answer to the offer and explain why.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
131 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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