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Your family have moved to a new house. Write a letter to an english speaking friend.

Your family have moved to a new house. Write a letter to an english speaking friend. rLNMm
Dear ClairaI'm just writing to let you know that we moved from our old house and found a new one. We were really fed up with living in a city centre. You know my parents: they hate noisy life, we had been living in a slung untill my father changed his job. I'm now enjoying from existing in small village. By the way, I have made new friends: Lucy and Susan. Noth of them are very friendly and sociable girls and they introduced me our new neighbours. I also have some other amazing news-I'm learning German. Can you beleive me? My father adviced me doing it, because, as you know, I always dream to go to foreign countries and I have finally choosen my future house, it is Germany. To achieve this, I should certainly learn German perfectly. Make sure you keep the first weekend in June free, so you can come to see our new house. Keep in touchJenny
Dear
ClairaI
'm
just
writing to
let
you know that we
moved
from our
old
house
and found a
new
one. We were
really
fed up with living in a city
centre
. You know my parents: they hate noisy life, we had been living in a slung
untill
my father
changed
his job. I'm
now
enjoying from existing in
small
village. By the way, I have made
new
friends: Lucy and Susan.
Noth
of them are
very
friendly and sociable
girls and
they introduced me our
new
neighbours
. I
also
have
some
other amazing news-I'm learning German. Can you
beleive
me? My father
adviced
me doing it,
because
, as you know, I always dream to go to foreign countries and I have
finally
choosen
my future
house
, it is Germany. To achieve this, I should
certainly
learn German
perfectly
.
Make
sure you
keep
the
first
weekend in June free,
so
you can
come
to
see
our
new
house
.
Keep
in
touchJenny
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IELTS letter Your family have moved to a new house. Write a letter to an english speaking friend.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
159 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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