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thanks friend for pet sitting you home.you should say-thank you and add some important information

thanks friend for pet sitting you home. you should say-thank you and add some important information 53xOV
DEAR FRANKLIN, thank you for your generous and thoughtful help. I was so desperate about this trip. I didn't have anyone to look after my house and pet except you. you helped me get the relaxing time that I was looking for so long. in this letter i emphasized all the information you can follow to stay in control. I hope nothing gets out of control, but if you need any help, you can me anytime. I, ve wrote my number on a stick note stuck to the fridge. spencer is a lovely dog. he will not be any trouble for you though, he likes to play a lot you need to be proactive around him. I installed revolutionized security look in my home so don't ever feel unsafe. hopefully, I live in a nice and helpful colony. you can seek anyone's help at any time. please keep the garden clear and don't forget to water the plant every day. at night keep every light off except the light in the kitchen. high music can bother neighbors at late hours so keep the volume of tv low. also, make sure you check the mailbox every day. you can use anything to make yourself comfortable. write me a fast reply and also let me know if you want me to bring anything for you. I am having a wonderful vacation just because of you. thank you once again. dear friend
DEAR FRANKLIN,

thank you for your generous and thoughtful
help
. I was
so
desperate about this trip. I didn't have anyone to look after my
house
and pet except you.
you
helped
me
get
the relaxing time that I was looking for
so
long.
in
this letter
i
emphasized all the information you can follow to stay in control.

I hope nothing
gets
out of control,
but
if you need any
help
, you can me anytime. I, ve wrote my number on a stick note stuck to the fridge.
spencer
is a lovely dog.
he
will not be any trouble for you though, he likes to play a lot you need to be proactive around him. I installed revolutionized security look in my home
so
don't ever feel unsafe.
hopefully
, I
live
in a nice and helpful colony.
you
can seek anyone's
help
at any time.

please
keep
the garden
clear
and don't forget to water the plant every day.
at
night
keep
every light off except the light in the kitchen.
high
music can bother neighbors at late hours
so
keep
the volume of
tv
low.
also
,
make
sure you
check
the mailbox every day.
you
can
use
anything to
make
yourself comfortable.

write
me a
fast
reply and
also
let
me know if you want me to bring anything for you. I am having a wonderful vacation
just
because
of you.
thank
you once again.

dear
friend
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IELTS letter thanks friend for pet sitting you home. you should say-thank you and add some important information

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
238 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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