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You had lost contact with the friend what you manage to get his her contact lately and decide to write a letter. In your letter explain how you got hold of his/her contact. Explain why you want to contact him/or her. Ask question about himself or herself

You had lost contact with the friend what you manage to get his her contact lately and decide to write a letter. In your letter explain how you got hold of his/her contact. Explain why you want to contact him/or her. Ask question about himself or herself AKRw
Dear Sonia, You must be very surprised to receive this letter. It's been long since we were last in touch. I've really miss you badly. I decided to write you because I had lost your contact so I was not able to talk with you for long time. Actually, my mobile phone got crashed due to some virus and lost your contact number as well as address. As you're not using Facebook and Instagram, I somehow managed to fine your elder sister on Facebook. Luckily, she remembered me and gave your contact and address. The reason, I needed to touch with you that I'm getting married on 13th May, 2021. Moreover, my marriage would not be completed without your presence because you've always being with me since childhood. I'd love if you beside me as I am entering new phase of my life. Would you give me details of your arrival? So that I can arrange tickets and accommodation as well for you and your family. How many years old your son? Give regards to your mom and dad. I'm waiting to here from you soon. See you soon. Yours lovingly, ABC
Dear Sonia, You
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surprised to receive this letter. It's been long since we were last in touch. I've
really
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miss
you
badly
. I decided to write you
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because
I had lost your contact
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so
I was not able to talk with you for long time. Actually, my mobile phone
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got
crashed due to
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some
virus and lost your contact number
as well
as address. As you're not using Facebook and Instagram, I somehow managed to fine your elder sister on Facebook. Luckily, she remembered me and gave your contact and address. The reason, I needed to touch with you that I'm getting married on 13th
When specifying a month and year, the comma is unnecessary: "May 2021".
May, 2021
.
Moreover
, my marriage would not
be completed
without your presence
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because
you've always being with me since childhood. I'd
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love
if you beside me as I am entering new phase of my life. Would you give me
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details
of your arrival?
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So
that I can arrange tickets and accommodation
as well
for you and your family. How
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many
years
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old
your son? Give regards to your mom and dad. I'm waiting to
Did you mean "hear"?
here
from you
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soon
.
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See
you
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soon
. Yours
lovingly
,
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ABC
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IELTS letter You had lost contact with the friend what you manage to get his her contact lately and decide to write a letter. In your letter explain how you got hold of his/her contact. Explain why you want to contact him/or her. Ask question about himself or herself

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
191 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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