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A sports club in your area about to be closed and you oppose to that . Write a letter to the manager and make suggestions why it is important that the club stays open.

A sports club in your area about to be closed and you oppose to that. Write a letter to the manager and make suggestions why it is important that the club stays open. 2YwJ

Dear sir, My name is kulwinder kaur and I am a life time member at your sports club. I heard from someone that the club is going to close. I am writing this letter to tell you it is not a very wise decision. This club has been here in this locality since 2002 and it has become the integral part of this society. It become a place to socialize and to do exercise. Without this club it will be really difficult for the people of this area to get some exercise. I heard that a supermarket will be replacing the club. As you know there is already one supermarket in this area and by bringing another one, this locality will be cramped by the traffic coming to supermarket. So I urge you to pay close attention to my letter and please reconsider your plan to close the sports club. Hoping for your consideration! Yours faithfully, Kulwinder

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kulwinder
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kaur and
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life time
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club
. I heard from someone that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessstaff
club
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going to close
. I am writing this letter to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
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very
 wise decision. This You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessstaff
club
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become
 a place to socialize and to do exercise. Without this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessstaff
club
 it will be really
 difficult for the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 of this area to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 exercise. I heard that a supermarket will be replacing the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessstaff
club
. As you know there is already one supermarket in this area and by bringing another one, this locality will be cramped
 by the traffic coming to supermarket. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I urge you to pay close attention to my letter and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 reconsider your plan to close the sports You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessstaff
club
. Hoping for your consideration! Yours faithfully
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