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You had an appointment with the bank and now you realized that you won't be able to go. Write a letter to the manager. Give details about your appointment.Explain the reason why you can't make it. Ask other dates.

You had an appointment with the bank and now you realized that you won't be able to go. Write a letter to the manager. Give details about your appointment. Explain the reason why you can't make it. Ask other dates. OVAjE

Dear sir, I have an appointment with you regarding my car loan on May 2nd, but I shall not be able to meet you. I apologize for the inconvenience it had caused you. The reason behind this is that my brother is facing some medical issues since last year. It has got critical so, we have to go to Delhi for his treatment next week. We will be there for a week at least. I have canceled all my appointments because of this reason. It would be great if, you can give me some other date for the meeting in the second week of May. You can call me on my number 9747388297 or email me the dates and timing at my email address which is xyz@gmail. com. Once again, I apologize for the trouble I caused you. Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours sincerely, XYZ

Dear sir,

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but
 I shall not be able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 you. I apologize for the inconvenience it had caused you.

The reason behind this is that my brother is facing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 medical issues since last year. It has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 critical This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
, we This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 go to Delhi for his treatment next
 week. We will be there for a week at least. I have canceled all my appointments because of this
 reason.

It would be great if, you can give me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 other date for the meeting in the second week of May. You can call me on my number 9747388297 or email me the dates and timing at my email address which is Possible spelling mistake found.
xyz@gmail
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.

Once again, I apologize for the trouble I caused you. Thank you for your time and consideration.

Yours sincerely
,

XYZ

IELTS letter You had an appointment with the bank and now you realized that you won't be able to go. Write a letter to the manager. Give details about your appointment. Explain the reason why you can't make it. Ask other dates.

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

147 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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