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You had an appointment with the bank and now you realized that you won't be able to go. Write a letter to the manager. Give details about your appointment.Explain the reason why you can't make it. Ask other dates.

You had an appointment with the bank and now you realized that you won't be able to go. Write a letter to the manager. Give details about your appointment. Explain the reason why you can't make it. Ask other dates. OVAjE
Dear sir, I have an appointment with you regarding my car loan on May 2nd, but I shall not be able to meet you. I apologize for the inconvenience it had caused you. The reason behind this is that my brother is facing some medical issues since last year. It has got critical so, we have to go to Delhi for his treatment next week. We will be there for a week at least. I have canceled all my appointments because of this reason. It would be great if, you can give me some other date for the meeting in the second week of May. You can call me on my number 9747388297 or email me the dates and timing at my email address which is xyz@gmail. com. Once again, I apologize for the trouble I caused you. Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours sincerely, XYZ
Dear sir,

I have an appointment with you regarding my car loan on May 2nd,
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but
I shall not be able to
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meet
you. I apologize for the inconvenience it had caused you.

The reason behind this is that my brother is facing
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some
medical issues since last year. It has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
critical
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so
, we
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have to
go to Delhi for his treatment
next
week. We will be there for a week at least. I have canceled all my appointments
because of this
reason.

It would be great if, you can give me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
other date for the meeting in the second week of May. You can call me on my number 9747388297 or email me the dates and timing at my email address which is
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xyz@gmail
.
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com
.

Once again, I apologize for the trouble I caused you. Thank you for your time and consideration.

Yours
sincerely
,

XYZ
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IELTS letter You had an appointment with the bank and now you realized that you won't be able to go. Write a letter to the manager. Give details about your appointment. Explain the reason why you can't make it. Ask other dates.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
147 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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