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You find a bag somewhere. The owner address and name were there on the bag. Write a letter to the owner. Inform where you found the bag. Write about the contents of the bag. Hoe he/she can collect it.

You find a bag somewhere. The owner address and name were there on the bag. Write a letter to the owner. Inform where you found the bag. Write about the contents of the bag. Hoe he/she can collect it. E3ymq
Dear Miss Scott, I am writing this letter to inform you that I found your bag on a sky train from the Waterfront to Joyce Collingwood yesterday. I entered the train at Burrad and this bag was in the seat next to me. No one picked it up. Out of curiosity I saw the Id that was in the outer pocket of the bag with a transparent holder and there was your photo with your name and I looked around and asked everyone if this person is here on board. I looked in your bag for your contact details and I found there was a key and some other documents in there. I understand you must be worried about your things. As you have your license and other important cards in here. But you can relax because your bag is safe and sound with me. You can collect your belongings from my home the address is 3489 street 40 b surrey. You can call me at this number 876775899. Yours sincerely, XYZ
Dear Miss Scott,

I am writing this letter to inform you that I found your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
on a sky train from the Waterfront to Joyce Collingwood yesterday.

I entered the train at
Possible spelling mistake found.
Burrad
and this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
was in the seat
next
to me. No one picked it up. Out of curiosity I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
the
Possible spelling mistake found
Id
that was in the outer pocket of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
with a transparent holder and there was your
The usual collocation for "photo" is "of" not "with". Did you mean "photo of your name"?
photo with your name
and I looked around and asked everyone if this person is here on board. I looked in your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
for your contact
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
and I found there was a key and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
other documents in there.

I understand you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be worried
about your things. As you have your license and other
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
cards in here.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
you can relax
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
is safe and sound with me. You can collect your belongings from my home the address is 3489 street 40 b surrey. You can call me at this number 876775899.

Yours
sincerely
,

XYZ

IELTS letter You find a bag somewhere. The owner address and name were there on the bag. Write a letter to the owner. Inform where you found the bag. Write about the contents of the bag. Hoe he/she can collect it.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
171 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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