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Write a letter to a magazine about your neighbourhood problem.

Write a letter to a magazine about your neighbourhood problem. MMXxq

Dear Sir. I am John Simpson, a resident of New Avenue. On the behalf of my neighbours, I am writing to express our dissatisfaction with building another mall in our territory. Our concern is about construction of new shopping mall in our area. However, it has already congested with parks, a supermarket and a library as we are also suffering from noisy and polluted atmosphere. We would suggest to build it in City Mann as they have no any supermarket. They would be very pleased with this suggestion, I believe. I am writing to require a support from your esteemed daily as we can easily inform the problem to government with your aid. Hoping your prompt consideration of this urgent request. Yours faithfully.

Dear Sir. I am John Simpson, a resident of New Avenue. On the behalf of my Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbours' is British English.neighbors
neighbours
, I am writing to express our dissatisfaction with building another mall in our territory. Our concern is about construction of new shopping mall in our area. However
, it has already congested with parks, a supermarket and a library as we are also
 suffering from noisy and polluted atmosphere. We would The verb 'suggest' is used with the gerund form: "suggest building".suggest building
suggest to build
 it in City Mann as they have Did you mean "now" (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?now
no
 any supermarket. They would be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfied
pleased
 with this suggestion, I believe. I am writing to require a support from your esteemed daily as we can easily
 inform the problem to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 with your aid. Hoping your prompt consideration of this urgent request. Yours faithfully
. 

IELTS letter Write a letter to a magazine about your neighbourhood problem.

Letter

American English

1 paragraphs

123 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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