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You had a dinner with your friends family. Write a letter to your friend and express your feelings about the dinner. In your letter, you should say :- what you enjoyed at the dinner? describe how you feel about his/her family invite your friend and his family to your place.

You had a dinner with your friends family. Write a letter to your friend and express your feelings about the dinner. In your letter, you should say: - what you enjoyed at the dinner? describe how you feel about his/her family invite your friend and his family to your place. Ro5G
Dear Komal, Hi! Hope this letter finds you in the pink of health. I am writing this letter to thank you for the wonderful evening with you and your family which I spent at your home last Sunday evening. You know! All dinner items were my favourites. One of the dish was a lip-smacking taste that I still remember. The delicious hand-made receipies of your grand mother I wouldn’t forgot whole life. You and your family are generous. They welcomed me warmly as I am their child. Not only mouth watering food but hospitality of your family was also plasant. Your grand parents so open minded and updated current generation. I am so impress with them. Do you know the Diwali festival Coming on next month? I would like to invite you and your family member On dinner at my home. I will organized party on this days. We will celebrated new year together. I hope you will definitely join us on this occasion. I once again thank you for the beautiful evening spent at your house and hope to see you Soon. Yours Lovingly Rinkal
Dear
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Komal
,

Hi! Hope this letter finds you in the pink of health. I am writing this letter to thank you for the wonderful evening with you and your
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family
which I spent at your home last Sunday evening.

You know! All dinner items were my
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favourites
. One of the dish was a lip-smacking taste that I
still
remember. The delicious hand-made
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receipies
of your grand mother I wouldn’t
The verb 'wouldn't' requires base form of this verb: "forget"
forgot
whole life.

You and your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
are generous. They welcomed me
warmly
as I am their child. Not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
mouth watering food
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but
hospitality of your
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family
was
also
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plasant
. Your grand parents
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so
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open minded
and updated
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current
generation. I am
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
Consider using a past participle here: "impressed".
impress
with them.

Do you know the Diwali festival Coming on
next
month? I would like to invite you and your
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family
member On dinner at my home. I will
The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "organize"
organized
party on
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this days
. We will
The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "celebrate"
celebrated
new year together. I hope you will definitely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
us on this occasion.

I once again thank you for the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
evening spent at your
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house
and hope to
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see
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Soon
.

Yours
Lovingly


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Rinkal
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IELTS letter You had a dinner with your friends family. Write a letter to your friend and express your feelings about the dinner. In your letter, you should say: - what you enjoyed at the dinner? describe how you feel about his/her family invite your friend and his family to your place.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
185 words
6.0
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