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Your friend Charlotte has invited you to her birthday party. However, you will not be able to go. Write Charlotte an email in response to this situation. (100-120 words)

Your friend Charlotte has invited you to her birthday party. However, you will not be able to go. Write Charlotte an email in response to this situation. (100-120 words) bwxq
Dear Charlotte, Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party. I still recall your last birthday celebration and this was a mesmerizing occasion to meet your friends and family. I wish you a very happy birthday. By the time I was accepting to come over for your birthday party, we had not yet finalized our own family party. Unfortunately, we settled on the same date and time as your party. I am therefore sorry to let you know that I will not be able to attend yours. I cannot believe how fast time goes by. Your last birthday occasion seems had been just a few months ago! I wish I could have been present to wish your birthday in person this year as well. I would, however, like to meet you next Saturday and give your birthday gift. Save my birthday cake until then. I look forward to meeting you soon and wish you a very pleasant birthday. hope to hear from you soon. Best wishes, Enola.
Dear Charlotte,

Thank you
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very
much for inviting me to your birthday
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party
. I
still
recall your last birthday celebration and this was a mesmerizing occasion to
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meet
your friends and family. I
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wish
you a
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very
happy birthday. By the time I was accepting to
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come
over for your birthday
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
, we had not
yet
finalized our
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own
family
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
. Unfortunately, we settled on the same date and time as your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
. I am
therefore
sorry to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
you know that I will not be able to attend yours.

I cannot believe how
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fast
time goes by. Your last birthday occasion seems had been
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just
a few months ago! I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wish
I could have been present to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wish
your birthday in person this year
as well
. I would,
however
, like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you
next
Saturday and give your birthday gift. Save my birthday cake until then.

I look forward to meeting you
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soon
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wish
you a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
pleasant birthday.
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hope
to hear from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Best wishes,

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Enola
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IELTS letter Your friend Charlotte has invited you to her birthday party. However, you will not be able to go. Write Charlotte an email in response to this situation. (100-120 words)

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  American English
6 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
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