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You let stay a friend called Kim at your flat while you're on holiday

You let stay a friend called Kim at your flat while you're on holiday mlXK

Dear Kim: Don't say thanks. It's great to know that you are taking care of my flat so an intruder doesn't break into. Firstly, the keys are hidden behind the first pot of flowers on your left hand. Also, I should tell you that there are some rules in my flat. The first rule is about noises, don't turn on the music too loud because it can annoy my neighbors. The second rule is about my closet, if you want to use something I wish you let me know. The last rule is the cleaness of my flat, you know I hate to see everything dirty. Finally, you can buy food in the market that is down the street. It's super cheap and has so much options for all types of dietarian restrictions. I will expect to see you when I come back. Love and kisses, Bea.

Dear Kim:

Don't say thanks. It's great to know that you are taking care of my flat This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 an intruder doesn't break into.

Firstly
, the keys are hidden
 behind the first
 pot of flowers on your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 hand.

Also
, I should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 you that there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatutedecreeprecedentguidelineregulationruling
rules
 in my flat. The first
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatutedecreeprecedentguidelineregulationruling
rule
 is about noises, don't turn on the music too loud This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it can annoy my neighbors. The second You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatutedecreeprecedentguidelineregulationruling
rule
 is about my closet, if you want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 something I wish you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 last You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatutedecreeprecedentguidelineregulationruling
rule
 is the Possible spelling mistake found.cleanerscleanestclearnesscleannesscleanses
cleaness
 of my flat, you know I hate to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 everything dirty. Finally
, you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 food in the market that is
 down the street. It's super This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :economical
cheap
 and has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
Use "many" with countable nouns.many
much
 options for all types of Possible spelling mistake found.dietitiandietaries
dietarian
 restrictions.

I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 back.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
Love
 and kisses, Possible spelling mistake found.BEABeSeaBeatBeamBear
Bea
. 