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Write a letter to the restaurant to thank them. Mention the food, service and the atmosphere. Also, suggest any improvements to make things better.

Write a letter to the restaurant to thank them. Mention the food, service and the atmosphere. Also, suggest any improvements to make things better. J8q5
Madam/ Dear Sir I am writing to express my satisfying with your service and staff. We are decided to dine out at my birthday and we trying your bistro for the first time. it was excellent choice. I was at your restaurant on Wednesday celebrating my birthday with my friends. Me and my friends had amused time dancing and eating. We ordered Birthday cake it was delicious. The waiter also, helping us to choose perfect plate for our dinner. You have a prefect staff which training very well. The waiter also, did not late to bring our order. We want to thank your chef for this tasty food, we ate until full-up. Despite, I am a fussy eater I adored your food and the quality justifies the bill. My only concern to have a DJ man play good music to dance because the playlist was dull and one of my friends had to play his own music. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Mark Adel
Madam/ Dear Sir

I am writing to express my satisfying with your service and staff. We
are decided
to dine out at my
birthday and
we trying
your bistro for the
first
time.
it
was excellent choice. I was at your restaurant on Wednesday celebrating my birthday with my friends.
Me
and my friends had amused time dancing and eating. We ordered Birthday cake it was delicious. The waiter
also
, helping us to choose perfect plate for our dinner. You have a prefect staff which training
very
well. The waiter
also
, did not late to bring our order. We want to thank your chef for this tasty food, we ate until full-up. Despite, I am a fussy eater I adored your food and the quality justifies the bill.

My
only
concern to have a DJ
man
play
good
music to dance
because
the playlist was dull and one of my friends had to play his
own
music.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Mark Adel
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the restaurant to thank them. Mention the food, service and the atmosphere. Also, suggest any improvements to make things better.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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