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You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter • provide information about yourself • give details of your previous work experience • say why the company should consider you for the job

You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter • provide information about yourself • give details of your previous work experience • say why the company should consider you for the job Wjna
Dear Mr. Starck This is Mr. Manmaya Ku. Sahoo of Bhubaneswar, India writing to you regarding the recent advertisement in "The Times" about the opening in your company for the position of the senior developer in the IMS department. I have work experience of 2. 5 years in XYZ corporation as a junior assistant developer and I have got a degree in Engineering from SOA University in Computer science and technology. I have working experience on the technologies mentioned in the requirements and I have also completed a couple of certifications in language A and B. In my previous company, I was awarded the most prolific performer of the month and the employee of the year. My experience from the previous company will surely come in handy especially for a mid-sized company like yours not only in completing the targets for the clients but in training and shaping up the freshers and new joiners and expanding the company's horizon to different domains as well. My CV and application forms are attached. I believe I would be the perfect candidate for this job. , if you could arrange an interview for me, for this position that would be great for me. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Manmaya Kumar Sahoo
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of Bhubaneswar, India writing to you regarding the recent advertisement in
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The Times
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about the opening in your
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for the position of the senior developer in the IMS department.

I have work experience of 2. 5 years in XYZ corporation as a junior assistant developer and I have
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a degree in Engineering from SOA University in Computer science and technology. I have working experience on the technologies mentioned in the requirements and I have
also
completed a couple of certifications in language A and B.

In my previous
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company
, I
was awarded
the most prolific performer of the month and the employee of the year.

My experience from the previous
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will
surely
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come
in handy
especially
for a mid-sized
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company
like yours not
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in completing the targets for the clients
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in training and shaping up the freshers and new joiners and expanding the
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company
's horizon to
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different
domains
as well
.

My CV and application forms
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I believe I would be the perfect candidate for this job.
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if you could arrange an interview for me, for this position that would be great for me.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
sincerely
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IELTS letter You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter • provide information about yourself • give details of your previous work experience • say why the company should consider you for the job

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  American English
9 paragraphs
211 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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