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Letter of complaint to a problem

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to show my interest in the computer course provided by your institute. I came to know about this computer course from news papers advertisements. Computer language that you teach during this course interests me a lot. I am willing to join this course but the eligibility criteria of this course is that candidate must have completed elementary course. I am very much interested to enrol for the course. Problem is that I had started elementary course because of my personal circumstances, I couldn't appear the exams for the same so that I don’t have the certificate and won’t be able to submit it as a supporting document. Without certificate of elementary course I am not eligible to enrol. I request you to consider my case and treat it as special exception so that I can enrol for the course. I am ready to share the knowledge, which I gain during my elementary level through the project report if you wish. Please grant me a permission to enrol in this course. This course will really help me to find a relevant job in computing. Hope to hear from you soon. Awaiting for your reply. Yours Sincerely,
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to
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show
my interest in the computer
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course
provided by your institute.

I came to know about this computer
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
from news papers advertisements. Computer language that you teach during this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
interests me a lot. I am willing to
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join
this
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course
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but
the eligibility criteria of this
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course
is that candidate
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must
have completed
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elementary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
. I am
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very
much interested to enrol for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
. Problem is that I had
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started
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
elementary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of my personal circumstances, I couldn't appear the exams for the same
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that I don’t have the certificate and won’t be able to submit it as a supporting document. Without certificate of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
elementary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
I am not eligible to enrol.

I request you to consider my case and treat it as special exception
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that I can enrol for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
. I am ready to share the knowledge, which I gain during my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
elementary
level through the project report if you wish.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
grant me a permission to enrol in this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
. This
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
will
really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me to find a relevant job in computing.

Hope to hear from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
. Awaiting for your reply.

Yours
Sincerely
,
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IELTS letter Letter of complaint to a problem

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
202 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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